My Daddy's Job

No  ,I did not  want   holiday  ,
I did not  want   to   go   to   site  
Where  blocks  or  bricks I had  to   lay  
Or   pillar   and  beam I would cast 


I did not  want  dad's  dirty   Job,  
Where   cement  would  mar school boy up;
Egal  where  you were in the  globe  ,
Sand   to   mix   or   water   to   mop  .


The  stench  of rebuilding  cesspool  
Like  the foul smell  from  rotten egg;
No I would not  be such  a fool,
To   put   leg where he   put  his  leg  .

Now  I am  older  than he was;
He was lion,I am a mouse.


Contest:  Job( 8 Syllables)  

Sponsor:Sara
 Date  : Nov 14,2014.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:30 PM
dropping back with my congrats Kayod5:-) Hugs jan x
Deschler Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Our parents often want us to follow in their footsteps, but sometimes their careers are just not right for us. I would not want to do this job, either!... Congrats on your win, Kayode. Good work!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:43 PM
War daddy ein Maurer? Congratulations on your win Kayod5
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 6:02 PM
I notice the same thing when I write my girlfriends in Germany. I am constantly going back correcting what the computer changed. Frohe Weihnachten wuensch ich dir und deine familie.
Kayode Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 1:47 PM
No Problem Brenda,mine also does same here,especially with"Its";whenever I write "its".my Computer always Changes it to german"Ist"and many times I have to write and rewrite before I can get my Poem in English.Have a good Weekend my friend...huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 10:13 AM
My computer tries to correct everything I write in German into English.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 10:12 AM
Danke
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Dance Kayod5. Meine Schwager war Maurer. Das ist sehr schwer an deine knocken.
Kayode Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:58 PM
Sicher Brenda! Mein Papa war Maurer und es war nicht einfach fur mich, als ich jung war. Ich bedanke mich fur deine Mühe und Aufmerksamkeit...mach's gut and bleib gesund.
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Kayod5, congratulations on your win, Blessings 7
Kayode Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Eve for the visit and the message...cheers and huggs
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:12 PM
I see that you learned a lesson in life that your father was a strong man..I enjoyed reading this entry in my contest..Thanks for sharing part of your life with us..Sara
Kayode Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Yes indeed Sara,that is just the message; immense thanks for this contest and my Placement...cheers and huggs
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Amazing write with nicely crafted sonnet, congrats on the win
Kayode Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:35 PM
Thank you Dr. for this visit and the message...cheers and huggs
Jones Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 12:36 PM
I so relate to this one as well...I always remember my dad heading off to work at 4:30 every morning..such hard work...thank you
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 1:55 PM
great write -makes you appreciate the sacrifices our parents made - I especially love the final couplet:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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