My Dad Told Me I'm My Own Person

My flower wanted to be his own plant,
But he would not be had he not been planted.
My flower would get frustrated by the realisation that he was in the process of blossoming —
He would need someone to hold the hose over him when the clouds had prioritised another,
Prioritised them so much that they
Seemed like salty sea.
 
That is, when he is finally accompanied by the others,
Outside on the big wide soil.
 
For the time being, he resides in his pot,
Like a baby in their cot,
Using it as comfort,
Yet crying out to leave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bayles Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 8:04 AM
I like the surprise ending.
Griffiths Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 3:55 AM
I'm glad, thanks Mike!
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