My Dad, My Fascination

Dad, how much I loved you
You did not give me time to tell;
So quick was your way to depart
That sorrow and grief
That came my way
Are yet to breathe their last.

You knew how to play with me
Whenever I fell short of friends;
You knew how to never impose on me
Anything that I disliked;
You knew to take me out of punishment
The moment I had shed tears.

You knew to make me 
Holy and intelligent
By the examples you did set;
You knew to give me time 
Even if it was in short supply;
You knew to motivate me
By the inspiring deeds you did.

You knew to take interest in things
That were close to my heart;
You knew to show happiness
At each and every success,
That came my way in school.

Humble and generous you were
As none I have ever known;
The more I have dug deep
To unravel you,
With the brushes of my heart,
The higher have you grown
In my love and esteem.

Behind your gentle eyes
There was ever this much warmth
That knew to melt away
All traces of unhappiness
Clinging onto me
In my hours of despair,
And declare the spring of love and friendship
Even with all the ice strewn around.

Yet, you knew not to show me
Your pain and discomfort
As you plunged deep 
Into the woes of health
And breathed your last; 
My head bends to the Almighty
To have had been fathered
By a soul like you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 3:54 AM
I really enjoyed your piece! A great tribute for a father! :)
Sewumber Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Truly very touching and well written. Must be proud to have such a father. I love it.
Deale Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 3:24 AM
Beautiful and touching. Loved your last line, giving thanks and giving insight into his soul
Binner Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 7:42 PM
A wonderful tribute to your father -- so well written and beautifully expressed! Keep on writing!
Schiavina Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 9:48 AM
That's a very beautiful poem and a tribute to all fathers. It brought me to tears.
Shagun Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 5:15 AM
Really..how difficult for you it would be to let it pen down.. Me too love my daddy but never get to express him ... loved your pen Mr.Rastogi...
Estable Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Regardless of the common language used in this poem to describe the father, this poem has feelings in a clear diction. Perhaps not so unique is a poem could be, but the pain is clearly seen in this try. You could have been less commonplace but poems of that nature are hard to pen for much has been said when writing this kind of verse. Good try! Luis Estable
Anish Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Fine tribute to your loved one. I have a poem called Paul's Gone on the site about my late father. I hope you decide to check it out. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Riordan Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 3:25 PM
This was a really nice poem, there are never enough words to tell someone you love and miss them. This is a beautiful read and I am sorry for your loss.
Duncan Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 2:49 PM
love this, I wrote one for my mom called Lillian :)
Imtiaz Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Love it..................Father,
Jarvis Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 12:14 PM
I loved this. The father we all wished we'd had and many of us wish we could be.
Agbolade David  Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Great lines; I felt myself drawn into your Dad’s large heartedness.
Buck Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 11:17 AM
A wonderful tribute to what must have been a wonderful dad. Thank you for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Franceschini Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Beautifully expressed from your heart. Congratulations
Barden Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Pramod - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
Kimathi Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:38 AM
Hi Pramod. Congrats for your fine placement in the contest! ;-)
Y. Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 1:04 AM
Hi Pramod, I agree with Silent, this is a loving and heartfelt tribute to your. I wrote a poem about my dad too, I loved him very much. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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October 20, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Great tribute to your dad Pramod.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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