My dad in the Mirror

My belly's fat,
a lack of hair-
but kindly eyes...
I see you there!

(the beauty you see in me is a reflection of you)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Jones Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 9:43 PM
Love this!
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Good that you can see your dad in your eyes, and they are kindly and not evil. Thanks for entering your work in my contest. Congratulations on your placement. Way to go. Sara K
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April 27, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Jack this is so simply beautiful….kindly eyes…..l just love it! Debx
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