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My Crutches

By: Ali Taha Alnobani My crutches: You shared me all my life But I didn't I was a bird My wings shared the love rhyme To take a look before the adventure To have love forever *** My desire is wider than the open sea and the sky Feathers which grew on my two crutches Drank the wind like a roaring waterfall I can understand the madness I can live in a wild flower Then fly with the pollen To taste the remote ports And breathe like sails *** The story started in a remote forest When a strange man was chopping the wood Then a crazy magician puffed on them to be crutches Till that moment, I had no wings But the feathers grew from my soul in a very cold night The fire shaped me to be a love bird Singing once and traveling an other *** " you are mad" said the trees My face, my neck, were nervous And afraid of squeeze The long days became short And my desire is as wide as the seas I couldn't escape But I knew life more and more *** Inside me There is a cave of horror echo A voice asked me to try To go out To have a moment with the vast sky Angels and monsters are living together An angel upstairs A monster downstairs None sees the other But the bird Can draw his mad city Despite the long roads And the dark cave *** My crutches I'm the heart of the earth And you are my sail To draw the life taste *** And you Believe me; start now There are many things to do For the sake of love and life ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/16/2016 11:03:00 PM
that's a great read. Ali, enjoyed the end. LINDA
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:29:00 PM
interesting good write!
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Date: 11/11/2010 5:34:00 AM
great write!
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:05:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight .. hope your time on Soup is special and fun and full of luv..
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Date: 11/6/2010 12:22:00 PM
thank you very much carol, I will do so thanks again Ali
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ali. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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