My Crush

Whenever I see my crush, There's always a low hush He is so extremely sexy, That I dream of him making love to me My heart goes all aflutter, And melts like soft butter For when his face I happen to see, I go really weak in the knee It seems like it's been forever, Since I felt this burning fervor I keep wishing he will notice me, And fall in love deeply

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John Rhinem

Date: 3/31/2009 6:26:00 PM

Smile~I just had to read one more!:) How do "You" do it? This write just flows soo perfectly within every possible way!!!:):) Speaking of melting hearts? Sometimes when I read "Your Beautiful Words," as these jewels of preciousness here~My own heart melts, within the gentle and amazing "Beauty of Whom You Are!!!":):)~Smile, "You Are A Gentle Flower of Loveliness & A Treasure Janice Herzog!!!":):) And I mean this soo very sincerely!:) "My Love To You Again, John!!!"~Goodnight Dear Janice!!!:):)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2009 3:37:00 PM

No matter how old we are, we feel exactly as you describe when a special someone sends a tingle down our spine. I hope this feeling lasts forever for you, Janice; there's really nothing that can compare to it, is there? Love, Carolyn

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/20/2009 2:00:00 PM

Such a cute write! Love that feeling of infatuation where you feel almost dizzy. So exciting there is someone new. Good luck! Love, Shar