My Critic

I like my critic

he Reminds me of myself

Totally useless 




7/25/2018
Senryu contest.

humorousironymesenryu

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David William Breidenthal

August 22, 2018 at 1:16 AM

Aha clever and greatly written!

Roy Pett

August 22, 2018 at 3:16 PM

I think I am my biggest critic so really appreciate your very kind comment JW, thank you so much my friend. :))

Warren Doll

August 1, 2018 at 7:23 AM

Roy, I'm laughing out loud. So well done!

Roy Pett

August 1, 2018 at 7:32 AM

Thanks Warren, so pleased you saw the humour, it gave me a chuckle when I wrote this, thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))

Eve Roper

July 26, 2018 at 5:20 PM

Roy, you are not useless,, I hope your talking about a dog that rest all the time. :) Great imagery & good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Roy Pett

July 27, 2018 at 3:56 AM

Thank you so much Eve you are too kind, It was meant for a contest but I had already entered one, thanks again for your wonderful comment and support much appreciated. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 26, 2018 at 3:55 PM

LOL! Needed that chuckle ;) xomo!

Roy Pett

July 27, 2018 at 3:51 AM

Thanks Maureen, it made me chuckle when I wrote it too, thanks again for your support my friend. :))

Tom Cunningham

July 25, 2018 at 6:37 PM

Lol, we know it's pure fiction Roy.

Roy Pett

July 26, 2018 at 4:18 AM

Thanks Tom, I posted this because I was going to enter it into Mick Talbot’s Senryu contest to find I had already entered one, what a plonker, pleased you found it funny as I did when I wrote it, thanks again for your support much appreciated.