My Critic

I like my critic he Reminds me of myself Totally useless 7/25/2018 Senryu contest.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/22/2018 1:16:00 AM

Aha clever and greatly written!

Roy Pett
Date: 8/22/2018 3:16:00 PM

I think I am my biggest critic so really appreciate your very kind comment JW, thank you so much my friend. :))

Warren Doll

Date: 8/1/2018 7:23:00 AM

Roy, I'm laughing out loud. So well done!

Roy Pett
Date: 8/1/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thanks Warren, so pleased you saw the humour, it gave me a chuckle when I wrote this, thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2018 5:20:00 PM

Roy, you are not useless,, I hope your talking about a dog that rest all the time. :) Great imagery & good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Roy Pett
Date: 7/27/2018 3:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve you are too kind, It was meant for a contest but I had already entered one, thanks again for your wonderful comment and support much appreciated. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/26/2018 3:55:00 PM

LOL! Needed that chuckle ;) xomo!

Roy Pett
Date: 7/27/2018 3:51:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, it made me chuckle when I wrote it too, thanks again for your support my friend. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/25/2018 6:37:00 PM

Lol, we know it's pure fiction Roy.

Roy Pett
Date: 7/26/2018 4:18:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I posted this because I was going to enter it into Mick Talbot’s Senryu contest to find I had already entered one, what a plonker, pleased you found it funny as I did when I wrote it, thanks again for your support much appreciated.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/25/2018 6:00:00 PM

C'mon Roy. You are not useless. You're good for writing poems. That's something not everyone can do:)

Roy Pett
Date: 7/25/2018 6:13:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, pleased you think I’m good for something lol, thanks again for your support and encouragement I really appreciate it. :))