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My Creepy Cat


      It is frightening how my sweet, cuddly cat can change,
Into a sinister and menacing hunter intent on stalking her prey;
            She loves the garden and always lays beneath cool leaves,
But is just waiting, watching, and planning a bloody kill. 

      And from her hiding place she comes creeping, creeping,
Slithering, edging up inch by inch, skulking some little animal;
            Teeth chattering and emitting a deadly rattling eerie sound,
Her eyes a fixed stare and her body intense and tensed.

      This snuggly pet of mine is a predator with true speed,
Hiding, stalking, pouncing and chasing learned with her toys;
             She likes to prolong the event and thus the creeping,
And then, she leaps and it is very scary for a moment.

      But the tickle of her bell, alerts the bird to fly far away,
And the mouse to slip into it's hole again safe and sound;
            Then with a meow and sweet purr, she comes creeping,
Creeping home, happily without a dead thing in her mouth.

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October 11, 2015

Poetry/Verse/My Creepy Cat
Copyright Protected, ID 15-716-307-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the contest, Best October Poem, 
sponsor, Skat

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 11:40 AM
It's amazing to see their primal nature take over when they stalk their prey. I think the bell around her neck was a good idea! I enjoyed your poem, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 11:59 AM
Kim, thanks for visiting my poetry and for the comment and congrats, yes, my fuzzy, cuddly little feline is quite the killer but the bell works, she hates that bell....
Negron Flores Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings.
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Nayda, thanks for the congratulations ~
A. Sharma Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry Broken!
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Upma, thanks for visiting my creepy cat, and for the congrats ~
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Skat, thank you so much for selecting my creepy cat as a placement in your contest, I am so honored ~
Scars Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:41 PM
Congrats on your win Broken Wings!- lu
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Laura, thanks for visiting and for the congrats, appreciate so much~
Inman Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 9:24 PM
My daughter's leaves us presents of small snakes, lizards and the occasional field mouse. Nice write, BW.
Dunn Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Dear Broken wings Lol this sounds like my kitty cats, love the story because it is true, OMG my two girls bring daddy all their still live surprises from the garden though, I was at work once and he called me yelling about one bring him a giant black bird, like ok what am I suppose to do I'm at work honey, lol love this it's just great, cheri
Tor Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 10:02 PM
You a nice cat BrokenW. Mine likes to play with animals she doesn't kill them she just plays with them. LOL
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:55 PM
well, I am glad she has no dead things in her mouth! I know exactly that weird rattling sound you speak of. One of my cats did it very strongly just sitting at the window watching birds. I have yet to see any of my cats actually take a mouse or some other small creature and eat it. Maybe we bred that instinct out of them by giving them so much loving. Great idea this poem was for the creepy contest.
Onclaud Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:15 PM
tingling images make me chill, constance... love the feline mood of this piece.. and thanks for my rank in your contest; so glad i made it.. huggs
Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 1:39 PM
BW, I never read a cat being described like you so skillfully penned. Great job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
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