My Couplet Morning

as the morning light show,
the burning candle i blow

then comes the morning kiss
that makes me feel i'm in trance

the morning prayer i say,
to set the pace for the day.


later on the morning push up,
that makes the blood rush up.


then the kitchen door i open,
to put the food in the oven.


and  i set out in pleasure,
to catch the day treasure.



6th August, '12 
Modupe Sefunmi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gooden Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Enjoyed your couplet morning. All the best in the contest and thanks for your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 9:15 PM
This is really cool. I like how you used short lines and told precisely your morning routine!!
Arowolo Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 2:39 PM
Nice and wonderful couplets,Modupe.wishing you luck in the contest.Thanks for stopping by and for the comments...XOXO..
Gorelick Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 7:33 AM
Sweet! A perfect way to start the day...BG
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