My Country

This is an ancient land lapped by two seas in the south,
          girdled by mountains the highest on the earth.
Many mighty rivers flow across this fertile land,
          monsoon rains wash the land where I took my birth.

An eon old civilization grew in west flank,
          permeated the native race of the land.
They assimilated flux of foreign invasion,
          made country’s diversity a unique brand.

Steeped in Vedic culture and the karmic way of life,
          takes pride in the invention of the zero.
In midst of medley of custom, language and belief
          modern times are now coming at a pace slow.

Time will come when the nation will take its rightful place
          in the world stage regaining its lost aura.
Glorious sun of eminence will rise in the east,
          shine on future of my country India.

August 24, 2018

(Form used in the poem is Doha which is a
Hindi form of self-contained couplet in which 
each 24 syllable line is split into two unequal
parts of 13 and 11 syllables)
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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Hello Subimal, India sounds like an interesting place to visit. Have a nice day my friend. Lots of ancient history there. Have a nice day my friend.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 4:16 AM
Thank you, Darlene. You are most welcome to visit.
Pett Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal with your well written couplets, I have seen many documentaries on your wonderful Country and would love to pay a visit some day. :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, Roy for your visit. You are very welcome to visit India
Gauthier Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your top win, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Thank you, Line
Waters Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations on win. Nice to see love of India from inside. It is a whole new view. And the positive outlook to future.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 4:04 AM
Thank you, Virginia for your comments.
Dutta Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 12:36 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Warm Wishes.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 4:03 AM
Thank you very much.
Dutta Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:37 PM
First stanza shows an Earth Scientist. Then Indian History. Heritage, Culture, Tradition, Basic Science. At the end touch of a popular Bengali song. Nicely cleverly composed in compact form. Congrats.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 1:12 AM
Thank you for your visit and for the comments. Btw, which Bengali song?
Ashley Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 8:33 PM
A captivating and exquisite poem, Subimal, of your beautiful country and culture. I love the poetry form as well.. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 1:13 AM
Thank you, Susan for your encouraging comments.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Fantastic piece and land and history and people Subimal, you have my vote ;) my best to you in the contest! xomo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 1:13 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen.
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