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This is an ancient land lapped by two seas in the south, girdled by mountains the highest on the earth. Many mighty rivers flow across this fertile land, monsoon rains wash the land where I took my birth. An eon old civilization grew in west flank, permeated the native race of the land. They assimilated flux of foreign invasion, made country’s diversity a unique brand. Steeped in Vedic culture and the karmic way of life, takes pride in the invention of the zero. In midst of medley of custom, language and belief modern times are now coming at a pace slow. Time will come when the nation will take its rightful place in the world stage regaining its lost aura. Glorious sun of eminence will rise in the east, shine on future of my country India. August 24, 2018 (Form used in the poem is Doha which is a Hindi form of self-contained couplet in which each 24 syllable line is split into two unequal parts of 13 and 11 syllables)

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Date: 9/19/2018 1:58:00 PM
Hello Subimal, India sounds like an interesting place to visit. Have a nice day my friend. Lots of ancient history there. Have a nice day my friend.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/20/2018 4:16:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene. You are most welcome to visit.
Date: 9/9/2018 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal with your well written couplets, I have seen many documentaries on your wonderful Country and would love to pay a visit some day. :))
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/11/2018 5:12:00 AM
Thank you, Roy for your visit. You are very welcome to visit India
Date: 9/8/2018 6:11:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your top win, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/11/2018 5:11:00 AM
Thank you, Line
Date: 9/5/2018 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on win. Nice to see love of India from inside. It is a whole new view. And the positive outlook to future.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/7/2018 4:04:00 AM
Thank you, Virginia for your comments.
Date: 9/5/2018 12:36:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Warm Wishes.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/7/2018 4:03:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/26/2018 1:37:00 PM
First stanza shows an Earth Scientist. Then Indian History. Heritage, Culture, Tradition, Basic Science. At the end touch of a popular Bengali song. Nicely cleverly composed in compact form. Congrats.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/27/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and for the comments. Btw, which Bengali song?
Date: 8/24/2018 8:33:00 PM
A captivating and exquisite poem, Subimal, of your beautiful country and culture. I love the poetry form as well.. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/27/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your encouraging comments.
Date: 8/24/2018 7:39:00 AM
Fantastic piece and land and history and people Subimal, you have my vote ;) my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/27/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen.

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