My Cosmic Magnet

You are my  c o s m i c  magnet-
a gravitational force pulling in all my senses.
You stole my loneliness and gave me hope.

When the stars  a l i g n  because all my freedom drifted into oblivion, 
your sagacity brings forth moments of revelation. 
I can finally see our universe for what it is-
nothing but an adoring premonition of spellbound constellations. 
                       
The twilit cosmos bring forth intimate affections.
                    For we were written in the planets.
  I hunger for your moon, you crave my stardust.

       I was born to breathe your breath,
          you were made to fill my lungs.
    I was born to bleed in your veins,
          you were made to trace my silhouette.
       I was born to feed your soul.

For I never knew starvation until you satisfied my appetite. 
 
          This is our universe...
          the one place where our love 
          will never cease to exist. 





July 28th, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Grasso Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Love it, Laura! Congratulations! ...Fran
Gauthier Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Beautiful, Lu Loo. Congrats on your top win.
Dutta Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 12:33 AM
CONGRATS Loo/ Love.
Gaul Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Nice win. Interesting cosmic point of view. Well penned, deserved recognition.
Talbot Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Loved it, a well worthy winner, congratulations on your first place... Mick
Scars Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 3:48 AM
Awww thanks sweet Mick have a blessed day :)-luloo
Marc Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:37 PM
I really enjoyed this Laura. Congrats on your win - well deserved!
Scars Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 3:47 AM
Many thanks PM, have a great day :)-luloo
Lawless Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 4:33 PM
..."I never knew starvation until you satisfied my appetite...." Damn!!! I love that line Laura.
Scars Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 3:45 AM
Thanks John one of my favorite lines too...have a good day :)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:22 PM
I love the passionate imagery. Awesome, Laura. Congrats on your winning poem.
Scars Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 3:44 AM
Thank you so much sweet Line! I am honored you liked it...be blessed :)-luloo
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