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My Contst Pom

a firkin of port and a glass through my lips a last drop will pass my thirst I now blunt as thoughts it will stunt in my john my food will amass 10/08/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2016 5:45:00 PM

haha, That is a great limerick!! I have one a bit tamer. To post later!!

James Inman
Date: 10/12/2016 12:56:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/9/2016 4:22:00 AM

Hilariously good, James. Best of luck for the contest.

James Inman
Date: 10/9/2016 12:50:00 PM

Thank you Afzal.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2016 2:10:00 AM

ha ha ha and the final line really creased me up James! Viv will have a tough time judging this one! Hugs Jan xx7

James Inman
Date: 10/8/2016 6:57:00 AM

Thanks Jan, it looked very different before I removed all the Es. It's nice to hear such a great comment from the Mistress of Limerick. I haven't written one for a very long time.