My Conscience Speaks To

Hello! my dear bad mind...................
I am not with You
I am being, ever and anon, misguided,
misled, misrepresented                                                                                                           and 
even badly cheated         
made me bind to undergo
utmost slavery
in regions 
where I never
expected myself to be so.

I know your best friend
who is?
keenly the same
but have with refinement,
very sharp
trying to bow down me
foully by any means
that's Your own
the bad intelligence.

For, I warn you both,
if I survive you will
if I die you too
there’s  no excuse.

You both
keep with me
to live alive 
if not 
will be beaten
my conscience speaks to.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/11/2011 10:15:00 AM
another amazing write bl....well penned...such a pleasure to read...thanks so much for sharing....luv....chiquita
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Bl Devnath
Date: 8/11/2011 11:24:00 AM
Thanks for inspiring me to feel more and write more. You also pen nicely, I read. God bless us all. bl
Date: 6/15/2011 12:28:00 PM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today BL. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 7:16:00 PM
I as not an army man but as a civilian salute you for sharing with my poem and for giving inspiration for boosting up my courage to share my poetry with the World. Nice one always appreciates the good qualities of others. In me how much of these, I dont know. Certainly, You are nice one amongst the nices............. With soft holly love of my heart beat, Mr. Carol.
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