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My Confession

all is well as well is all october ends with summers fall at least in my eyes I see from as far as far as me I look across the room at thee the darkness eyes as black as see at night they are a silent sound calm and inviting her soul is bound I wish to have her soul as I demand but not as possession but a close friend this is my confession...

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Date: 7/21/2010 11:02:00 AM
Wrote it when I was 12 and I still have comments!
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:00:00 AM
well done and said on the confsssion nice one Ryan, really enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:26:00 AM
Many congratulations to you for your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
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Date: 2/22/2010 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Ryan. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2010 7:59:00 AM
Much for the reader to think about in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 2/17/2010 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:32:00 AM
p.s. you do have my soul, or whats left of it. as i do yours, atleast i hope :) -D.dimaio
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:31:00 AM
and happy valentines day to you too <3 my love :) -D.Dimaio :)
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:27:00 PM
thank you my love. happy Valentines day. -?yan
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:31:00 AM
ah my love, if only you knew the way i feel when i think about you. if only you felt every time you smiole you make my heart melt although im fine as long as i have you. i love you -D
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Date: 2/6/2010 12:30:00 PM
i am saying 7 because i know the poet and who the poem is about..... :) sooooooo........ and it is an awesome poem.....
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Date: 2/2/2010 5:04:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:09:00 PM
I love the freshness of each phrase, and the genuineness of the voice. Good write. Welcome to poetry soup, hope you know you are among friends for you got a friend in me.
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