Ryan Emerald Poet Rhyme

My Confession

all is well as well is all
october ends with summers fall
at least in my eyes I see
from as far as far as me
I look across the room at thee
the darkness eyes as black as see 
at night they are a silent sound
calm and inviting her soul is bound
I wish to have her soul as I demand
but not as possession 
but a close friend

this is my confession...

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Ryan Emerald July 21, 2010 at 11:02 AM Wrote it when I was 12 and I still have comments!

Poet Destroyer A July 21, 2010 at 11:00 AM well done and said on the confsssion nice one Ryan, really enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

James Fraser February 22, 2010 at 10:26 AM Many congratulations to you for your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2010 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Ryan. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

February 21, 2010 at 7:59 AM Much for the reader to think about in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Charmaine Chircop February 17, 2010 at 3:59 PM Beautiful poem

Dani Sousa February 17, 2010 at 8:32 AM p.s. you do have my soul, or whats left of it. as i do yours, atleast i hope :) -D.dimaio

Dani Sousa February 17, 2010 at 8:31 AM and happy valentines day to you too <3 my love :) -D.Dimaio :)

Ryan Emerald February 12, 2010 at 9:27 PM thank you my love. happy Valentines day. -?yan

Dani Sousa February 11, 2010 at 10:31 AM ah my love, if only you knew the way i feel when i think about you. if only you felt every time you smiole you make my heart melt although im fine as long as i have you. i love you -D

Dani Sousa February 6, 2010 at 12:30 PM i am saying 7 because i know the poet and who the poem is about..... :) sooooooo........ and it is an awesome poem.....

Carol Sunshine Brown February 2, 2010 at 5:04 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

L'Nass Shango February 1, 2010 at 8:09 PM I love the freshness of each phrase, and the genuineness of the voice. Good write. Welcome to poetry soup, hope you know you are among friends for you got a friend in me.