My Condolences

Few are the comforts to speak, oh......my
A hug strives to articulate my ...............condolences
This is the man you lived ............................for 
He was so strong,..............................................your
Everything.............................................................
Respects are due, but none can afford your........loss


1-12-2020
Elf, end line form
Two poems in one
Credit: Brian Stand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Neumann Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 4:11 AM
Condolences. Thank you for sharing, Kai
Ligon Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Thanks, Kai. A couple people at work had lost their father recently, and even having gone through it too, there's always a loss for words.
One Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 1:05 PM
Oh I see the two poems... Very clever and we'll done
Ligon Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Thanks, Silent One. The idea was from one of Brian Stand's blog challenges.
Horsman Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Love the message here and the tribute, Juliet.
Ligon Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Thanks, Harry.
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Well done, Juliet.
Ligon Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Thanks, Line. I've heard it said that sometimes it's better to hold your tongue in tough times like this. A friend of mine once said, "I hope you told him you loved him.... Did you?" (Referring to my dad after his passing.) I told her I didn't. (And it secretly upset me because those aren't words we used in our family, so it didn't even cross my mind.)
Adams Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 6:22 PM
nicely done Juliet... see they are easy and kind of fun are they not? glad to see you give it a try ...best wishes my friend :) hugs
Ligon Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Thanks, Sandra. I agree, fun and easy. I got down to line four and I subconsciously had FATH, so I decide to make it an acrostic as well with FATHER. Was great to see your example for inspiration. Poetic hugs.
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