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My Commendable Mother

Mother, you’re a precious treasure A gracious gift from God indeed Your wondrous love, I can’t measure… Mother, you’re a precious treasure Along your memories’ pleasure Of care attending to my need… Mother, you’re a precious treasure Commended for virtuous* deed!
*Proverbs 31:10 Who can find a virtuous woman? for her price is far above rubies. May 6, 2019 5th place, "Celebrate May with a Triolet" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich; judged on 5/15/2019.

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Date: 6/6/2019 12:54:00 PM
Hello Beata Agustin, a wonderful for for your mother. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2019 2:19:00 PM
Lovely, Beata. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/15/2019 6:03:00 PM
And this is a commendable triolet, sweetie!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/7/2019 4:20:00 AM
- The world's best ... a beautiful write to your mother, Beata :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/7/2019 3:22:00 AM
Wonderfully written triolet! A great tribute to your mom! Best wishes in the contest! XOXO - Briauna
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Date: 5/6/2019 4:15:00 PM
you make your mom proud with this gracious tribute... galing, beata,,,huggs
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