Beata Agustin Poet Triolet

My Commendable Mother

Mother, you’re a precious treasure
A gracious gift from God indeed
Your wondrous love, I can’t measure…
Mother, you’re a precious treasure
Along your memories’ pleasure
Of care attending to my need…
Mother, you’re a precious treasure
Commended for virtuous* deed!

*Proverbs 31:10 Who can find a virtuous woman? for her price is far above rubies.

May 6, 2019 

5th place, "Celebrate May with a Triolet" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich; judged on 5/15/2019.

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 6, 2019 at 12:54 PM Hello Beata Agustin, a wonderful for for your mother. have a nice day my friend.

Line Gauthier May 17, 2019 at 2:19 PM Lovely, Beata. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2019 at 6:03 PM And this is a commendable triolet, sweetie!! Congrats in my contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2019 at 4:20 AM - The world's best ... a beautiful write to your mother, Beata :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Briauna Brown May 7, 2019 at 3:22 AM Wonderfully written triolet! A great tribute to your mom! Best wishes in the contest! XOXO - Briauna

Nette Onclaud May 6, 2019 at 4:15 PM you make your mom proud with this gracious tribute... galing, beata,,,huggs