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My Color Is Not Supreme

I'm a strip of rainbow segregated my profound uniqueness mitigated. With self esteem exalted to the extreme I dare not speak of another's shade for my color is not supreme. "We are all different and all the same." the bleeding hearts so bravely claim. Those who possess my exact train of thought I, alone, tolerate. So let us stay in true company with clones only of ourselves lest we discriminate.

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Caleah Buil

Date: 12/2/2014 1:33:00 PM

This was so powerful! There are so many ignorant people out there, it's better to just avoid them and dwell with like minded people or it'll just end badly. Nobody is better than the other. We're all human and make mistakes just like any other.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 12/13/2014 2:04:00 AM

There seems to be a lot of different takes concerning this piece. It's in our nature to flock to like-minded people - we feel most comfortable there, so it's nothing "wrong". However, it's only when we step outside that comforting bubble, and reach out, is when things will be able to change for the better.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2014 7:53:00 AM

My poem Tolerence fits in well with this conversation.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 11/3/2014 2:58:00 PM

I can see the similarities!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/26/2014 7:22:00 AM

A rainbow is made up of different colours that all together live in harmony. So it should also be with all human beings. None of the colours should be supreme, otherwise equality will turn into racism. // paul

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:59:00 PM

Well stated, my friend!

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/25/2014 8:47:00 PM

A discriminating mind believes in liberty through degrees of strength, only a fool dares not judge, only a gross hypocrite judges unfairly. The more wise one becomes the more they realize themselves in others Timothy. Great poem on the meaning of ignorance and hypocrisy! " I'm a strip of rainbow segregated..." excellent! J.A.B.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:56:00 PM

So happy you absorbed my message so coherently, Justin. I see many people who complain over "intolerance" and yet they themselves won't tolerate to be around other's that don't share the same views. Appreciate you stopping by and looking into my thoughts... come back anytime!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/25/2014 6:30:00 PM

You're not a just a strip of color , your the rainbow color that needs to unify the whole unit:) eve

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:54:00 PM

A very insightful comment, Eve. Singular colors, by themselves, don't look as pretty until they are thrown into a collage. Thanks for stopping by!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2014 2:58:00 PM

I sure enjoy seeing you back here posting poems like this one I have seen today!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:52:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! I hope I may continue to do so... :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2014 9:56:00 AM

I love all your colors Tim!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:52:00 PM

As do I yours - the whole spectrum. You are a wonderful friend!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/24/2014 9:52:00 PM

What an exquisite write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem here this evening! You have amazed me yet again with your rainbow talents! I love your wondrous poem that you have written! You did an excellent job, Great Work!!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:51:00 PM

You leave me smiling Russell. Come back anytime :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/24/2014 3:26:00 PM

You are the multicoloured colours of the rainbow..May.there ll be hundreds of clones.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:50:00 PM

Hundreds of clones like me?? I think that'd be a strange place to live in... perhaps a lot of hermits! Ha ha ha. Thanks for reading Miss Charmaine :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/24/2014 2:12:00 PM

Nope... you are definitely no segregated strip of a rainbow my friend... you ARE the rainbow complete. An excellent write and one I identify with. Xx~Xx

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 10:49:00 PM

Too kind, Kim. I'm happy that you enjoy all my colors :)