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My Cold Acceptence

Truth is truth and pain is pain both are burdens felt Scars of darkness carried since a young child Yesterday's gone And yet it stays Haunting screams of childhood from leather razor strap That cut the flesh in burning welts of red Beaten battered body lays in a heap A terror-filled mind with its cold disdain In my empty nights so silent My soul releases all its tears As I look back When trust was lost 6/24/18 contest Fragmented Verse sponsor Broken Wings-Dear Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/25/2018 2:59:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write, well done!
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:52:00 AM
Oh my. Congratulations on your win. This is a heartwrenching expression of pain and anger, despair and acceptance. Well done!
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Date: 7/23/2018 6:54:00 PM
Such deep remembered pain and sad emotions spill over into your emotional, powerful write, Frederic. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 7/23/2018 2:18:00 PM
Memories of raised welts on a young body from a razor strap cruelly administered, leave emotional pain wedded with physical pain that is never forgotton. Dancing around a room unabled to sit without excruciating pain, sears the brain. Unfortunately I relate to your poem on a personal level. Being stung by jelly fish compares somewhat. You express it so well Frederic. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 6/26/2018 6:38:00 PM
wow, a strong write, Frederic. Broken Wing's contests just bring out this kind of writing. She is sure to be well pleased. I for one, am!!
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:30:00 AM
Frederick.. I love how you exhaust all your emotion into your pen when you write. The result is always meaningful and memorable like this amazing work!
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Date: 6/24/2018 8:42:00 PM
Your aching painful truths flow with heart and soul through your tearful ink, Frederic. Poignant lines that so beautifully lay bare the echoes of past events so catastrophic to a young mind, body and soul. Your poem reaches in deeply and implores the emotional attention of my being to linger and feel your experiences through your heart-rending words.. I'm so sorry you bear this burden, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
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