My Cloud Nine By Didee

angst, feelings, immigration, racism, retirement, slam, today,

My Cloud Nine by Didee  ©

Eh, get off of my cloud you silly narrow minded fools
I never put out a ‘for rent sign’ and I make up the rules
My fluffy pure white cloud may leak if it becomes too reedy 
Many free-loaders climbed today saying they are the needy
I was the original caretaker making this place float upright
It is my inspirational thoughts that bound and kept it tight
As a one-man sanctuary with a (all-time) lease signed My Cloud Nine
Circling here and there with no stops making for little lost time
I, I and I are just ‘we’ and carry on well with no house keeping
It is you, him, her, and other hitch-hikers causing this here meeting
Take all of you off and far beyond and be gone from this man’s space
And find another cloud to 'share' and feed upon from your own human race.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/19/2015 12:27:00 PM
Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 6/19/2015 2:03:00 PM
Hi Sara nice to meet you and thank you for the 'congrts'---I had fun with this and am so pleased you had fun reading my versio....take care,.....didee
Date: 6/18/2015 11:42:00 PM
DIANE, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 6/19/2015 2:00:00 PM
Hli Linda I am glad you visited and thank you for liking it and commenting with the congratulations! Take care,.....didee
Date: 6/16/2015 9:17:00 PM
Diane, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 6/16/2015 9:46:00 PM
Hey girl this is a surprise! Glad you liked my poem. Had fun doing it and am very glad I shared it 'out' so to speak. There definitely were a lot of takes on this subject . I look forward to reading them all. Good night now, and take care and thank you so much......didee
Date: 6/11/2015 8:01:00 PM
If you search for that spark of good in everyone, you will find it and may even make it multiply. Guess I am that Pollyanna knowing most every raincloud produces a beautiful rainbow. I enjoyed reading your creative poem Didee. Blessings, Connie
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