Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Free verse

My Cloud By Upma

Get off my cloud 





Writing straight from heart,
I fail to stick to form of poetry sometimes,
No wonder I don't place in a contest,
But many caring comments guide,
Sometimes poets laugh at me,
And linguistic agony I do invite,

Want my soul to fly free,
and my pen to move liberal,
Words to align as they wish,
Melody to pick its notes,
And rhyme and set my heart beat,
To the content of the soul!

You intoxicate,
injure the sublime,
Make my heart bleed,
as sharp words pierce,

Enough of attitude,
If can't be a critique,
No matter how I write,
Or live or die,
Hey you !
Just get off my cloud !




Written June 13th, 2015
For SKAT's contest "get off my cloud"

6th place win

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Sara Kendrick June 19, 2015 at 12:09 PM Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A June 18, 2015 at 11:40 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A June 16, 2015 at 9:19 PM LOL, I love it kind of deep, for a rant.. Dr Upma, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 7:04 PM :) SKAT

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:28 PM I feel the same - the most important thing is we are writing and if someone doesn't like what we write - stuff them! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx