Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"my Closet's Open

Left with thoughts of yesterday...
Played in the rain and drifted away...
My closet is full of past mistakes...
Dust off this mind for a new awake...
Played a song from a past not forgiven...
Sipped my wine in a game not winning....
Live life to the end without a step not taken...
This heart beats with love, I'm not faking...
So breathe my breath , and swallow my soul....
My closet all open , let the skeletons roll....
We will all answer at the final bell , just have to
decide Heaven or Hell....

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Jay Porknbean September 27, 2010 at 6:53 AM This is now one of my favorit poems ever. good job

Wilma Neels September 21, 2010 at 4:28 AM Great ending to this captivating piece Mr. F! lv Wilma

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2010 at 10:22 AM Good afternoon, Michael! How are you on this wonderful day. As for me i am here enjoying the soup. Also with thoughts of yesterday! How I wish my thought would drift after all that rain play. Instead I find my self hating that person who wants things to change all of a sudden. At times life is not easy when we don't have the answers, but you are right about one thing. At the end he decides heaven or hell. Enjoyed reading your poem,..p.d.

Deb Wilson September 17, 2010 at 9:34 PM Yes we all have those skeletons to deal with and I'm thinking...Heaven...hopefully! Well written I really liked it..Take care~Deb

Francine Roberts September 17, 2010 at 5:30 PM good one Michael , much enjoyed

Joyce Johnson September 17, 2010 at 5:08 PM Enjoyed this one Michaiel. We all need to do little closet cleaning. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Alana Tye September 17, 2010 at 4:56 PM Wow! Very captivating and so true. We all have skeletons in our closet, and I personally, can't fit another thing in my closet! LOL Really good rhythm and flow. Love this read. Thanks for sharing. :) Cheers, Alana

Sara Kendrick September 17, 2010 at 3:33 PM I hope Heaven..Enjoyed reading your Rhyme this evening ..Very good rhyme and rhythm...I am glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for stoppiing by and commenting on my work..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2010 at 3:24 PM Well these words are pure Heaven Michael.. so breathe my breath and swallow my soul.. omg I luv the way u say things..White Knight.. did u enter my contest yet? luv to u from Jersey Girl forever..