My Circus

Like a White Face Clown
  Others hold in high regard
  Around and around
  My merry-go-round won't stop
  To let me be a Sad Face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Alex Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 10:45 PM
Beautiful Tanka. Congratulations!
Goff Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 3:24 AM
Thank you Christuraj!
Augustus Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Strand Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 12:33 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Jim.Rgds Brian
Rider Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest! Wonderful tanka. ~Trudy~
Richards Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations on placing in Matt's contest, James. A great tanka, well written!! ~ Love, Carrie
Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 11:31 PM
James congrats on placing in Matts contest, God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 9:02 AM
Well if it keeps you from having a sad face I hope your Merry-go-round never stops. Excellent poetry James.Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 3:04 PM
I enjoyed reading your Tanka and hope that there isn't anything sad in your life to inspire the writing of this Tanka. Sara
Chircop Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 2:53 PM
Hi Jim,why do you have to be aa sad face when you have friends around you----we are all the clown many times funny smiles hiding heart sorrows,but there salways light if we look deeper--charma
Bird Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 1:40 PM
I too sense some depth within this well penned tanka James, hope all is well and spinning where you are.
Richards Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 11:07 AM
This could have deep meaning...behind the happy face. Well done!! ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 8:44 AM
Very good Jim.Nic one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Pascarawlu Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 8:26 AM
This is great Jim, and far better than the poem that inspired it lol.
Higgins Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 7:41 AM
I love the title to this deep write Jim...the last two lines are very strong and the meaning behind them even more powerful.
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