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My Christmas Song

Light me a new candle,
  Put it before the manger,
    It is a bit cold, love.
      Yet we’re in no danger.

There's Jesus, a small babe
  In a cold, wintry day
    Lying on some fresh straw.
      Kneel down and calmly pray.

Mary, Joseph calmly,
  Adore the king of kings
    Shepherds come with their lambs
      Angels fly with bright wings.

Christ in Bethlehem born.
  Choirs sing heavenly hymns.
    Let us give Him His due
      Ask to forgive our sins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 4:14 AM
Dear Victor, this is a beautiful song. I really enjoyed reading this lovely write. Have a joyful and Happy Christmas!
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 2:14 PM
I missed this one in reading your works. So glad I found it. I love to read and hear the Christmas events all the time. I hope this is a wonderful Christmas season for you and your family. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Callus Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 2:35 AM
Your 'humble' Christmas song is lovely and written in the true spirit of Christmas, Victor! ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you a happy, blessed Christmas, and all the very best for 2026. // paul
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:03 PM
beautiful and deeply touching poem, Victor. Soothing words. "comfort and joy"
Rose  Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Oh how I wish I could hear you sing this to Lilian, :) Have a blessed Christmas, your heart is so precious !
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 12:46 PM
Beautiful nativity scene depicted. I like this Christmas contest !
Poet Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 8:39 AM
Victor, your poetry is filled with a comforting and reassuring faith that envelops each phrase. Have a wonderful holiday season!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 4:51 AM
The breaths of Christmas soothe the soul, Aloha, William.
Boles Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 3:24 AM
Victor, your faith is enfolded in every line of your poem, soothing and reassuring! Happy Holidays...ab
Daniels Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 3:01 AM
ThkU for re-posting, Victor. I liked the first line and : “we’re in no danger.” Christmas cheer to you & beautiful Malta. X.
Rolland Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 4:00 PM
it's Chrismas time, a time for loving everybody, emotional poem indeed, thanks poet wishes
Hind Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Lovely Christmas lyric- :)
May Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 12:47 PM
Very nicely penned, best wishes
Edmonds  Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 12:23 PM
A lovely Christmas song Victor, I read it to the tune of ‘Away in a Mamger’… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Merry Christmas! Beautiful lyric! Hugs
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