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Light me a new candle, Put it before the manger, It is a bit cold, love. Yet we’re in no danger. There's Jesus, a small babe In a cold, wintry day Lying on some fresh straw. Kneel down and calmly pray. Mary, Joseph calmly, Adore the king of kings Shepherds come with their lambs Angels fly with bright wings. Christ in Bethlehem born. Choirs sing heavenly hymns. Let us give Him His due Ask to forgive our sins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/14/2022 12:28:00 PM
Victor, this is so very beautiful! I'm saving it in my favorites. <3
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Date: 1/4/2022 10:27:00 AM
NIcely done.
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Date: 1/3/2022 11:25:00 AM
Very sweet poem, Victor!!
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:37:00 PM
Hello Victor ... a nice Christmas song with its true meaning highlighted - thank you Victor - Lindsay
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:08:00 AM
You have caught the nativity in all its glory...Lovely...Delice
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Date: 12/21/2021 3:04:00 PM
Lovely Victor. A fave for me. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and yours. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/21/2021 1:08:00 PM
- A beautiful song for the Christmas holidays, Victor :) - Love and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2021 1:07:00 PM
a lovely little Christmas song!
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Date: 12/21/2021 9:39:00 AM
Quiet reverence flows through your Christmas poem. :)
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Date: 12/21/2021 5:04:00 AM
Aww... What a cute picture and what a lovely Christmas song!!... Loved it Victor... Merry Christmas to you... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/21/2021 3:28:00 AM
A perfect near Christmas Song... I loved it...
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Date: 12/21/2021 12:08:00 AM
A simple and sweet song, sung from the heart ! Let us circle around the manger, behold his lovely face, put our supplications to Him and sing glory to him. Enjoyed this heavenly hymn !
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Date: 12/20/2021 7:07:00 PM
Beautiful song, Victor, I love it. a fav.
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Date: 12/20/2021 12:15:00 PM
I love the way this inspiring song seems to draw the readers in to gather around the manger, Victor. Have a blessed Christmas, Evelyn
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Date: 12/20/2021 9:04:00 AM
Victor, this is really nice. It is a fresh take on the nativity. I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/20/2021 8:48:00 AM
What a lovely poem all it needs is the melody, I pray God keeps you singing until the end of time, Merry Christmas Dear Victor :)
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Date: 12/20/2021 6:52:00 AM
Lovely piece Victor. Sending you love and hugs and Christmas well wishes, xomo! <3
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Date: 12/20/2021 5:26:00 AM
A lovely and inspiring poem, Victor, nice picture too. All my best wishes
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Date: 12/20/2021 5:25:00 AM
Much enjoyed the solemn tenor and rhythm of your song, Victor. I see the scene in your splendid description. Expertly delivered, as always.
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Date: 12/20/2021 4:56:00 AM
Love this humble lyric, Victor, it's simplicity appeals to me:)
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Date: 12/20/2021 3:50:00 AM
A lovely Christmas Carol Victor. If it's for the Carol contest, good luck. Tom
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Date: 12/20/2021 1:07:00 AM
Really nice Victor….I enjoyed this! Cheers…Debx
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