Notes About The Poem

repost 2011

My Choice Fourteen Line

A Requiem verse
nothing moves,
silence!
echos of voices,past
awake!
faces appear,then
depart!
a tear trickles,
slowly!
the music plays,
faintly!
emotion erupts,
again!

regret whispers,
in pain!

Note:
a quatorzain is a stanza or poem of fourteen lines
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September 16, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Well done Brian. I can feel it. I hope you have a nice day :)
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September 16, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Heidi
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