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My Chocolate Chip Cookie

This is a new twist...
created by me...
of an old favorite recipe...
that you will soon see.
It starts out the same...
as the package will show...
then comes the new stuff...
which I'll let you know.
First change to occur...
has to do with the butter...
you use to need two cubes...
now use only one.
Then add an equal amount of coconut oil...
Isn't this fun!
The next change to occur...
has to do with the flour...
use Rice flour instead...
It will give you new found power.
Power to create with no end in sight...
it may not turn out...
but then again it might.
Let your imagination run wild...
as if you're a child.
Try adding marshmallows or trail mix...
perhaps M-N-M's...
you won't run out of ideas...
cause the list never ends.


                             P.R. Deremer

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David Smith

Date: 3/5/2019 8:47:00 PM

You have got me hooked although I am a natural ingredient changer. I use Cook's bible from America and Edmond NZ as my go to cook books. Your poem is a call to all to to add their own flavour to whatever they undertake to do in life. THE list is indeed endless. Wonderful piece. Regards David in NZ

Carol B.

Date: 3/14/2017 11:55:00 PM

My favourite cookie :) It sounds like a healthy alternative. I liked this poem!

Pam Deremer
Date: 3/15/2017 11:32:00 AM

Thank you. It was fun to do.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2017 6:33:00 PM

I used to bake a lot but now my son has flown the nest and hubby is diabetic I don't bake as much otherwise would try and bake cookies:-) hugs Jan xx

Pam Deremer
Date: 3/15/2017 11:33:00 AM

Thank you for your comment.