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My Chance For Romance

Seeing you that first time, I heard a loud bell chime My heart was beating quicker, Because you were so near I wanted to speak to you, But my mind was all askew I saw you looking at me, And thought to myself, maybe? Then I turned and you were gone, My chance for romance never begun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2009 7:11:00 PM
nicely written and great last line.
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Date: 4/2/2009 4:11:00 PM
What a bummer. That's ok, just wasn't meant to be. Always a reason in my opinion. Someone better will come along. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/2/2009 9:51:00 AM
Great poem, Janice! Reminds me of words my Mom used to say: "He who hesitates is lost." Next time, I'll bet you will act more quickly.
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:31:00 AM
Sad write... but so well done. I was captured by your words and felt my heart ache as I read the last two lines. Your words really take the reader there. Smiles from Lolita
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