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My Chafed Bum

Here's one for Patricia, my friend from up north My hooha is just aching to ride there on a horse Need ointment in case My bum gets chafed Wearing a camisole should ease the pain that's in store

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/5/2017 8:14:00 AM

Saddle your pony and ride//You might end up with sore hide//Or maybe the horse//will, of course//It's up to you to decide. CHAFE ON JAKE!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/5/2017 9:54:00 AM

It's the price I'll pay to meet dear Patricia! Chafing or not! YEE HAW!!! 'AVE A GOOD ONE, MATE!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/5/2017 9:49:00 AM

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/5/2017 8:09:00 AM

Hmmm wearing a cami? Oh on a horse you are asking for the chaffing of a lifetime. Thanks for the words.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/5/2017 9:49:00 AM

LOL Do we need to take a "fairy" across to Christian Island?The horsie can swim but how far is it? xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/5/2017 6:14:00 AM

What a dedication to a friend, it is certainly a unique one my friend! What a delightful poem, such an enlightening piece I couldn't stop reading it! You still bring me laughter my friend! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/5/2017 6:24:00 AM

Hello dear friend... hope things are improving for you! You sure are up and at 'em today!!! CHEERS!