My Celestial Life

My life goes on and on
without any breaks nor rest
it’s like an icicle that melts
but never goes away.
My life is as perfect as it could be
like a rose to be seen
A garden of such beauty
from the fence to the house
My house is warm as a
fire burning in a forest
Music as Grace to the winds in a meadow
my room is messy as a tornado to a house.
The color of Red rose to blood
Color of the Night Sky to Black Sheets
those are the colors to life
Everyone else is happy with life
while I’m looking at stars in the night
Searching for a friend’s light
which are Galaxies away
Once I find her
She brings me happiness and joy
from her heart that chines at night
My life is as perfect as it could be
As we soar though the Nightless Skies of Day and Night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thompson Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 9:27 AM
wow! that was awesome, annebelle! That is the one that you showed me. I loved all of the Rose references too. Great job!
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October 26, 2014 at 5:13 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Annebelle - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it a lot!! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 25, 2014 at 12:13 AM
Beautiful piece filled with awesome imagery! Well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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