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Written 9 May 2026 for Cat Senryu Poetry Contest of JCB Brul

My Cat Mimi


a quick leap, a pounce,
her paws catch a gentle bird
my eyes with tears flounce.

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 15, 2026 at 5:47 AM

Congrats on your nice poem :-) Have a good weekend!

Kim Rodrigues

May 15, 2026 at 4:06 AM

Ohhh, Mimi! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2026 at 7:24 PM

Back with my congrats

Sotto Poet

May 14, 2026 at 8:14 AM

Yes, there are intelligent felines. They sit silently and observe. They respond without delay. Hopefully, she won't eat or harm the bird. To me, they seem too subdued when kept inside. Congrats on your podium win

Valsa George

May 11, 2026 at 4:16 AM

There are such smarties among cats. They sit quiet and watchful. When the opportune time comes they spring into action. Great senryu.

Andrea Dietrich

May 10, 2026 at 2:44 PM

Oh I hope she doesn't kill or eat the bird. My cats have never gone after birds or mice. I think they are too tame being in the house. A few times my cat's saw bird or mouse and didn't even know what to do

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