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My Cat Is Not Stupid

whiskers twitch
there's a dog in the litter
hello floor

4-7-13

Not sure if it's a senryu or a haiku? Help, please :)

beautifulcatdedicationdogfunnysenryu

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Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2013 at 9:47 PM

OI! I love the haiku... he he he... is she nursing the dog... I'm not sure... lol nor is the cat... he he he..I had puppies who enjoyed my cats company, but the cat felt different... all they wanted was love, not a swop... :-) Linda

Duke Beaufort

April 14, 2013 at 6:44 PM

Very funny. You are very prolific. I could only write because I took some time off from the regular routine. So, so long for now to you--a kind and insightful writer. I will visit this space often and take solace and inspiration from your wonderful words.

Timothy Hicks

April 14, 2013 at 2:48 PM

Haha, love animal-ku :) Cute! Whether it's a haiku or senryu I always just label it haiku for simplicity's sake. But technically haiku has to do with some sorta season... While senryu has the human element involved.