My Cat

Cat That paws my lap I will flap you And zap you're gone
She claws so much that I am bruised!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 8:49 PM
haha, I love cat poems. I once wrote of how my cat liked to snap at my legs with her teeth when I walked past her!! My new cat, the black one, will softly knead my arm with her claws in the morning so I will get up and feed her and she rarely leaves marks on me. She is an amazing creature. Hope yours is too.
Schumacker Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Hi Sara, Very funny, very clever and cute image. Nice job. I think I will try my hand at this poetry form. It is very interesting. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 8:37 AM
I adore cats and as a child we used to have a wonderful one called 'Poshpaws' but sadly I am now allergic to their fur:-) Hugs jan xxx
Kapoor Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Beautifully pictured rhymed. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor
Chakrabarty Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Oh No. But emotive lines with slash words lap/flap/zap rhyming 4-3-2. witty. Well written. Thank you Sara. Hug.
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