My Cat

Cat That paws my lap I will flap you And zap you're gone She claws so much that I am bruised!!!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2014 8:49:00 PM

haha, I love cat poems. I once wrote of how my cat liked to snap at my legs with her teeth when I walked past her!! My new cat, the black one, will softly knead my arm with her claws in the morning so I will get up and feed her and she rarely leaves marks on me. She is an amazing creature. Hope yours is too.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/5/2014 8:40:00 AM

Hi Sara, Very funny, very clever and cute image. Nice job. I think I will try my hand at this poetry form. It is very interesting. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2014 8:37:00 AM

I adore cats and as a child we used to have a wonderful one called 'Poshpaws' but sadly I am now allergic to their fur:-) Hugs jan xxx

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/5/2014 8:23:00 AM

Beautifully pictured rhymed. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/5/2014 7:03:00 AM

Oh No. But emotive lines with slash words lap/flap/zap rhyming 4-3-2. witty. Well written. Thank you Sara. Hug.