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My Car Bessie

I love my car called Bessie
Although she really is quite messy
All the doors are pretty rusty
Interior it is so dusty
Once she was a lovely blue
But now she's just a faded hue
The tyres are right down on their tread
And when I stop I feel such dread
One day a guy he came on by
My Bessie he did want to buy
I told him no, I love my Bessie
Even if she is quite messy

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Robert Johnson

March 28, 2017 at 12:15 PM

Just love poems about people's beloved rides. I wrote one year's ago titled Regal, Burgandy and Grey on my page 3 towards the bottom of the page. You might enjoy reading it.

Vera Duggan

March 28, 2017 at 11:34 PM

Hi Robert, yes I will go to your poem thank you and thank you for this lovely comment, take care......Vera

Paul Callus

July 16, 2016 at 4:37 AM

Messy Bessie must have been close to your heart, Vera:) It took us many years before we were able to afford a car, and that was a small Fiat Bis. It served us well for 17 years, and then we gave it to a mechanic friend of mine, after acquiring a Toyota from Japan. ~ Best regards // paul

Vera Duggan

July 16, 2016 at 10:31 PM

Well Paul it wasn't really close to my heart as it caused us so many problems, always spending money out on it but it is one car that sticks in our memory, we have had many cars but that was the worst, we have now come up in the world and have a SUV Hyundi. It will probably be our last car and she is brilliant, have had it for 8 years now and not one problem, thank you for reading this little poem and take care........Vera

Peter Dome

May 15, 2016 at 7:59 AM

Mines a Maserati, in my dreams .A three wheeled plastic pig in reality. 'Ethel'. Wanna swop? ok I'll take Bessy and two hundred Dollars for mine. Through in the furry dice.

Vera Duggan

May 16, 2016 at 12:16 AM

Oh Peter what big dreams you have, mine would be a Porche, but I am happy with what I have, we have Hyundi SUV and I wouldn't swap it for quids, Bessie went down the tip many moons ago. Take care.........Vera

Peter Dome

May 15, 2016 at 7:53 AM

ha ha. wonderful. you and peter are two of my favorite poets.love you work and Bessy. so visual a 7. well done. Pete.

Vera Duggan

May 16, 2016 at 12:13 AM

Love your work as well Peter, so glad we have seen through our differences now it is like we are family, I may not comment on your work but I do read it and enjoy what I am reading and as Peter has said in the past you seem to be getting better and better, we love hearing from you and I mean that from the bottom of my heart, take care my friend..........Vera

Robert Lindley

May 11, 2016 at 5:19 AM

S.O, I would have beat you replying, AND BEEN FIRST ,had I not stopped to get my first cup of coffee..LOL

Vera Duggan

May 11, 2016 at 11:40 PM

Now, Now boys don't fight over my silly little poems LoL......vera

Robert Lindley

May 11, 2016 at 5:17 AM

I ONCE HAD A 1973 DODGE CHARGER THAT I LOVED. I had to sell it during my first divorce. I'd take that car now over any I've ever owned since.

Vera Duggan

May 11, 2016 at 11:39 PM

My goodness Robert that would have been a big car, yes it is strange how we always remember our first car, as I said to Silent we have had a lot of troublesome cars in the past, take care.......Vera

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