My Cantankerous Computer

Last week my computer was on the fritz.

   The confounded thing was givin' me fits!

      Trouble was a sick modem.

         They jes' won't work without 'em!

            Life sans a computer is jes' the pits!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:09 PM
How I agree with this. My husband's computer died and now he is using mine. He is lost without his which is being repaired. At least I have my little Kindle, but it is a bit hard on my eyes. Great little Limerick!
Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 2:02 PM
It is hard to do without them once we get accustomed to them..Enjoyed reading your work..I took a job with the U.S. Bureau of The Census years ago and I had to learn how to do computer..I started to tell them that I did not want the job because that was a requirement..I am so glad that I learned it though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Relish Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 1:47 PM
A sick computer can sure give you a headache...
A  Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Hello Bob H., I can't stand when my PUTER gets the fritz. Hope you got the problem fix. Love SKAT
Laurie Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:30 PM
G'day Robert... Join the club Robert. This one of mine is acting like a teenage brat so a friend is building me up a more modern version. I sympathize with you from experience. Lindsay
Bauer Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:05 PM
ha! so glad you got it fixed, bob! maybe it was worth it to inspire this gem of a limerick!
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:03 PM
Makes you wonder how we coped before them! Love them or hate them they are in every aspect of our daily lives now:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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