Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

My Bucket List

What would I like to do before I leave this earth?
Mmm let me think, ah I know, I’d love tea at the Ritz with Colin Firth

I’d love to see my son graduate; I know he’s worked so hard
A visit to Easter Island and Pompeii would also be on my card

Some people would wish for money and some for fabulous wealth
But I consider myself so wealthy, because I have my health

I’d love to be a grandma; I hope this happens one day
But that is not on the cards yet, but it may happen who can say

I’d love to have my poems in print and write a poetry book
Others would be able to read my words; I hope they would take a look

We don’t know what is around the corner and when our life will end
But friends and family are so precious to me and on them I can depend.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Cynthia Jones January 15, 2015 at 8:39 AM I have a long "Bucket List." I know none of the things I want won't get crossed out, but that's ok with me. :OS LOL I enjoyed this write Jan. *S* Cynthia Cynthia Jones February 1, 2015 at 6:26 PM No. Me neither. Aww. I'm sure he would love that. *S* Cynthia Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 9:40 AM I'd never heard of a bucket list until the last few years - guess I would add one thing to this and that is to meet my poetry writing partner Darren Watson - sadly he's ill at the moment and we haven't written in 6 months but I would so love to meet the man who has encouraged me oh so much during the short time I have been writing:-) hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper January 1, 2015 at 6:59 PM Hi again Jan, Another great write. i love the way you started with the ritz and then finished with family and friends; they are the most important thing in everyones lives. PS i have been to pompey and stone henge i have seen both my chidren happily married i have two beautiful grandaughters. So my bucket list is about complete. hope you get your wish list filled love Shane xxx Jan Allison January 1, 2015 at 7:07 PM The Ritz is a dream and friends and family are the most precious things in our lives. Sounds like we have so much to be thankful for in our lives my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith September 25, 2014 at 12:48 PM Can't touch my bucket cause it's steaming hot.....mine is to visit all our national parks but there are many....hugs Tim Jan Allison September 25, 2014 at 3:50 PM ohh a steamy bucket list - guess I could add George Clooney to my bucket list for that LOl Hugs Jan xxx

Deborah Shiells June 2, 2014 at 5:29 PM Hi Jan, This is such a special and heartfelt write. Wonderful bucket list that is not only attainable but very memorable and worthy. Another synch for you and I. I too want to go to Pompeii. I'm not at all surprised. I hope all your wish's in this list come true,. Great write as always:~) Thanks for sharing this with us. Love and Peace, Deborah Jan Allison June 2, 2014 at 5:38 PM A long as i live long enough to see my son graduate from university then i will have achieved everything iI could wish for - the other things are 'nice to have' but to see him spread his wings and fly - can't think of anything more I want

Cecilia Macfarlane April 4, 2014 at 7:53 PM A wonderful bucket list Jan, realistic and reachable, I enjoyed reading. Hugs Jan Allison April 5, 2014 at 3:05 AM Thanks Cecilia I never ever thought of doing a 'bucket list' until i started writing - now I'd love to get some poems published for charity - will do it one day! Jan xx

Jack Ellison February 15, 2014 at 9:37 PM Absolutely love your style of writing, sister! Very much like mine... down to earth, folksy! I'll keep reading if you keep writing! Loving huggsies, Jack XOXOX Jan Allison February 16, 2014 at 4:46 AM Thanks for your comment my lovely long lost brother Jack. So glad we have met and are on the same wavelength. Amazing how poetry has brought us together. Your long lost cyber sister. Jan x

Skat A February 13, 2014 at 7:34 PM I don't have a bucket list, but if I did... I sure like to visit the Easter Island... Good one. SKAT Jan Allison February 14, 2014 at 4:33 AM Aww thanks for the comment SKAT. Have always wanted to visit there and Pompeii. I don't want much - most important thing is to see my son graduate the other things are nice to have .... and as for Colin Firth - well a girl can dream! Jan xxxx

Robert Pettit February 12, 2014 at 11:33 PM Those are a few nice personal wishes. I hope you get them someday. You have described everything here well. Just add the preposition "to" between "visit" and "Easter" in your fourth line. Also, add another "i" to the end of "Pompei". Jan Allison February 13, 2014 at 3:54 AM Many thanks for the lovely comments Robert. I have amended the 2 issues you have highlighted - It was around 3.30am UK time when i posted them - vile weather here couldn't sleep. Happy writing Jan x

Jenny Brewer February 12, 2014 at 10:03 PM very good xxx you might like my poem 'pain' xx Jan Allison February 13, 2014 at 3:54 AM Thanks as ever Jenny Will get onto your page probably tomorrow got very busy day. Jan xxxxxxxxxxxx