My Bruised Bird

white and black feathers
life within taken away
why, Stella, why?
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Last line cries out…Steeeeellla!
Crandall Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 7:10 PM
I like this concise poem, indeed, "why, Stella, why?"
Derden Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:49 AM
A question that deserves answers...but me thinks it is the same answer Sir Scorpion would give...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 5:18 PM
nicely done for the contest...best wishes with this entry.
Derden Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Thank you.
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