My Brother's room

I wonder why his is always open 
when I smell something rotten
Our kittens under his bed faints
I wonder why he closes his dome while at home
and opens it while away

Is his intentions to punish me and the kittens?
And when I am away
I pity the poor pets and neighbours

I wonder why his shoes are always clean
is the smell in my mind?
Or it’s his socks under the shoes
and why does he mock me o f my dreadlocks?
Tomorrow I am hiding all his shoes 
Hopping to see his socks
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Jones Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 6:51 PM
This is hilarious! I laughed out loud! Enjoyed your poem.
Kazadi Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Thanks Karen, I am glad you enjoyed the piece
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