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My Brother's Keeper

adventurous a free spirit unlike the rest of us part brother part Indian more akin to the land a live connection a maverick a youth a stallion in his prime dark skin dark eyes unlike the rest of us part brother part Indian purebred bohemian spent youth used and abused years adrift worlds apart bonds not severed AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on February 27, 2019

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Date: 2/28/2019 7:26:00 PM
A painful loss, I am sure. Well penned.
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Date: 2/28/2019 8:59:00 PM
Yes, it is so sad to see someone wither away and not become what they should be.
Date: 2/28/2019 1:34:00 AM
"Purebred bohemian" very nice poem
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Date: 2/28/2019 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy. My brother was such a beautiful free spirit in his youth.
Date: 2/27/2019 6:28:00 PM
So sad a write!
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Date: 2/27/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 2/27/2019 6:25:00 PM
A lot of information compressed into a delightful economy of words. Interesting story.
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Date: 2/27/2019 7:29:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, WA.
Date: 2/27/2019 4:22:00 PM
Interesting poem Line..
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Date: 2/27/2019 5:06:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, SO.

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