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My brother, John, was older than me; and I had ever looked up to him, As a golden sun seems always with you, but comes and goes at whim. My brother, John, taught me to roller skate, and how to fly a green kite. We rode bikes and red wagons, in mauve, swift days of summer delight. My brother, John, was very smart. Nonetheless, he was frequently tardy, Like faint stars, yet visible come dawn, having twinkling, confetti parties! We had fast friends in the neighborhood, of fluttering ruby leaves, fallen, Like fragrant fields woven into life's fabric, creating sometimes gardens. Fast vehicles brought flowery family, whose scents floated upon fresh air; Fine, fruity, spicy and fleeting, like the violet dawn, foretelling anywhere. We lived in the house of unhurried time, where fate peered in windows; And chorusing birds had no maestro, during the sunny days of primrose. Squirrels played on sidewalks of silver, beneath suddenly sapphire skies, On our Scarlet Street days of sultry weather, and dazzling, rainbow prize. National pride was naturally celebrated, with noisy picnics on 4th of July, When neighbors came together, laughing, purple martins wondering why. There were rose riots on every street, in the times of elegant, zinnia zest, As hot, blossom breezes blew forever. like the pink moon, night impressed. Yellow begonia buzz came from flowerpots, and dusk brought fuchsia fun; Since aromas of lush lavender filled the air, in the presence of bronze sun. Sports were vital to Brother. His Most Valuable Player status was pending. The school day at last came, when he'd know for sure-like red mist ending. I had left for class, but realized I'd not seen John. I found him still asleep. So alarmed he'd nearly missed his big moment, he was ready in a streak! My brother, John, was a natural leader. I had learnt how to swim from him. My brother, John, became Most Valuable Player, like hyacinth days comin.' My brother, John, is never late nowadays, like sweet dreams coming true. My brother, John, shines at sports, like the dyed sun of evening rearview. My brother, John, is a real champion, who has begun to focus upon goals, Like first days of mesmeric summer, as red butterfles go on flower patrols. 'Are you sleeping? Are you sleeping? Brother John, Brother John, Morning bells are ringing! Morning bells are ringing! Ding, dang, dong. Ding, dang, dong.'

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Date: 10/24/2024 9:26:00 AM
WOW!!! What a write. I enjoyed reading your "My Brother, John" write/story. You are blessed to have a great brother... Have a great day writing away.................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2024 5:40:00 PM
Thank you for your warm insights and lovely compliments, Paula. I hope your day is wonderful, too. :)
Date: 10/23/2024 12:00:00 PM
what a cute ending with the famous song. So this is a true story about your brother? I wonder how old he is now. You paint a charming picture of your neighborhood with some nice images.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/27/2024 9:02:00 AM
So nice to know
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/23/2024 5:15:00 PM
Your comments are so much appreciated, Andrea. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this tale. My brother, Steven, is 73 years old now. He was patient and did teach me a lot. We had endless fun playing, when we were young-with red wagons and bikes and kites and roller skates and balls and balloons. That is what I was recalling as I wrote this tale. My very best wishes, Evelyn :)
Date: 10/21/2024 8:21:00 PM
A very good poem on an old French ditty. I like this one for the construction of characters and the funny sleepiness of John. There are more of these nursery rhymes. I'm looking forward to reading.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2024 4:07:00 PM
Thank you for your treasured comments. I eagerly look forward to writing more like these. Blessings.
Date: 10/20/2024 2:30:00 PM
My brother, John, was very smart. Nonetheless, he was frequently tardy, Like faint stars, yet visible come dawn, having twinkling, confetti parties! … Fine, fruity, spicy and fleeting, like the violet dawn… There were rose riots on every street…always fun these couplets that are inspired by nursery rhymes. Hugs ~ Kim
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/20/2024 3:27:00 PM
I am so thrilled by your kind enthusiasm, Kim. Thanks so much for your warm remarks, my friend. :)
Date: 10/19/2024 7:53:00 AM
You have presented a panorama of the most scenic nature Evelyn and mixed in with your admiration of your Brother John. Loved sentence. Hugs Maria
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/19/2024 8:26:00 PM
My older brother is actually named Steven, and there is so much of him in this tale, with the exception of being 'most valuable player,' and the tardiness. Thank you so much for your gratifying remarks. Hugs :)
Date: 10/19/2024 3:29:00 AM
Such beautiful metaphors, mostly with floral connotations. An excellent poem, Evelyn. You always achieve great heights.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/19/2024 8:20:00 PM
I adore flowers! Thank you so much for your kind expressions. Blessings.
Date: 10/19/2024 3:12:00 AM
As always your poem frequently uses vivid imagery from nature, such as "fluttering ruby leaves," "violet dawn," and "yellow begonia buzz," to paint a rich sensory world. These descriptions serve as metaphors for the passing of time, childhood innocence, and the vibrant, ever-changing landscape of life. It is a beautifully woven tribute to your brother who shaped your childhood and continues to inspire you..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/19/2024 8:17:00 PM
I deeply appreciate your kind words, Silent One. It's always a pleasure to read your lovely comments. Many blessings, my friend.
Date: 10/18/2024 10:20:00 PM
Uh oh, he might be due for an intervention.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/19/2024 8:12:00 PM
Such a caring, sisterly thing to do! :)

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