My Brother

MY BROTHER:

               Used to think that God's name was "Harold,"

                         you know, after the prayer:

       "Our Father, whom art in heaven, HALLOWED be Thy name."

           (When he learned of his error, he was never the same.)

One time when I was three years old my parents wanted to go look at a house they were 
thinking of buying and they couldn't find

MY BROTHER:

              so they just left and took me. I was three. When we got back

MY BROTHER:

                  was sobbing so hard he was sick.

MY BROTHER:

                thought we had moved without him, abandoned him.

                                          HE WAS SIX

MY BROTHER:
    
                     Got my mother's beauty and my father's genius.
           (I got my father's looks *%#@%^ and my mother's brains #%@&*^)

MY BROTHER:

                     Also got my mother's insanity and my father's alcoholism.
                            (I guess I won, having inherited their stoicism.)

MY BROTHER:

                Was a comic genius. He was so funny, he could make a dog laugh.

MY BROTHER:

                         Was such a tragic figure, he made the angels weep.

MY BROTHER:

                       Is gone now, and I have only these odd memories to keep.


©Danielle White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Yates Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 9:20 PM
I am so sorry for your loss... Love of a sibling is such a unique love that never disappears but only seems to grow stronger no matter what the situation... Very beautiful great write!
Kershaw Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 4:11 PM
Danielle, I am so sorry for your loss, lame as that sounds in my own ear. I too lost a brother. Many years ago, but he is with me still. Perhaps both brothers will meet us on the other side. Been there a couple of times but they sent me back. I truly feel your emotions in this poem. Good Write. Love, Will
Gorelick Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 6:21 PM
I didnt know what to do when I read this..I decided to applaud his life with a couple tears. BG
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 5:58 PM
I think that is how we tend to remember those we loved. In bits and pieces....funny, serious, tender, sometimes ridiculous moments...all those wonderful, interesting things that make up a life. A sweet poem.Nicely done, Danielle.
Shango Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Funny yet sad ... a true anecdotal weave of genius, bravo
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