My Brother

self-righteousness at the expense of others makes- other of my brother

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/15/2018 5:18:00 PM

It sure does ... Makes him a 'bother' instead of a brother, God forbid... ~ Gershon

Greg Gaul
Date: 8/15/2018 8:56:00 PM

Thanks for your clever remark Gershon, appreciate the read.

Al Juman

Date: 8/7/2018 12:07:00 PM

I am slow so it took me a while to get it . This is excellent. I like -- good my friend

Greg Gaul
Date: 8/7/2018 12:35:00 PM

Thank you Al. It might be a bit too obtuse but I wanted to make the reader think a bit without being too cute. Haiku is not supposed to be clever or tricky. This one might be on the edge. Appreciate your comment.