My Brother

self-righteousness at
the expense of others makes-
other of my brother
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 5:18 PM
It sure does ... Makes him a 'bother' instead of a brother, God forbid... ~ Gershon
Gaul Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thanks for your clever remark Gershon, appreciate the read.
Juman Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 12:07 PM
I am slow so it took me a while to get it . This is excellent. I like -- good my friend
Gaul Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Thank you Al. It might be a bit too obtuse but I wanted to make the reader think a bit without being too cute. Haiku is not supposed to be clever or tricky. This one might be on the edge. Appreciate your comment.
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