My Broken Column

I have wore myself ragged
Giving myself to my children,
 my husband,
 and into the work force
Piece by piece I break away
Giving to anyone in need
Leaving my body as an open door
For all to see
My inner beauty 


The broken column
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 11:07 PM
Karen, very simply said but heartfelt, quite lovely, congratulations on your win
Croft Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Thank you sheri
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Cleverly expressed, congrats!
Croft Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:02 PM
thanks richard
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November 7, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Karen, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~~
Croft Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Thank you!!!
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