My Bride

A lingering grief deep in my heart , I tried so hard to shun
The frivolous world that seems so odious
That feeling didn't last as you were the one
Who changed my melancholy , you are ambidextrous
 
You turned my barren soul into green meadows
With your inner peace and shining lovely smile
Spiky cactus in burrows of solitude and shadows
Turned to love trees surrounding a wonderful domicile
 
On the beach looking at the far moon and fronting sea
A caress that changed stillness of sea to waves of tide
I believe that this is like what you have done to me
But I wish this impact lasts forever , you and me beside
 
So please , my lady , Can you be my bride?
 
By: A. Badr
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 25, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Lovely peom.
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August 7, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Ahmad,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 6, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Ahmad, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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