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My Bride

A lingering grief deep in my heart , I tried so hard to shun The frivolous world that seems so odious That feeling didn't last as you were the one Who changed my melancholy , you are ambidextrous You turned my barren soul into green meadows With your inner peace and shining lovely smile Spiky cactus in burrows of solitude and shadows Turned to love trees surrounding a wonderful domicile On the beach looking at the far moon and fronting sea A caress that changed stillness of sea to waves of tide I believe that this is like what you have done to me But I wish this impact lasts forever , you and me beside So please , my lady , Can you be my bride? By: A. Badr

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/25/2015 6:51:00 PM
Lovely peom.
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Date: 8/7/2015 11:29:00 PM
Ahmad,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/6/2015 12:49:00 AM
Ahmad, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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