My Braino Has Withdrawn

There's only so much air, what happens when it's gone? Will we challenge our neighbours to a game of Mahjong? How about an arm wrestle Or a challenge skipping pebbles That's weird, methinks my braino has just withdrawn
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Allison Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Great one Jack i had a break in the UK for 8 days and my muse is still on an extended holiday:-( hope you are well:-) hugs jan xx
Eastman Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Never fear... Grandpa Troll is here... And without a doubt he's right... He says the air recycles at night.... Above and under the trees... In a glorious cascade of rainbow lights... So have you been outside to check it out? He calls it an effect of the Aurura Borealis. PS. I don't argue with Trolls... LOL
Breidenthal Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Love your thoughts here, Jack. You always have something clever to say. It's funny what our brains can come up with. I love your weirdness! Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:09 AM
"I love your weirdness!"... you say the nicest things! LOL LOL LOL Love, Jack xxx
Smith Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Some times our brains must rest...too often we put them to the test...smiles turn to frowns...must just shut them down...hey lookie there some breasts...Happy Father's Day Jackson
Ellison Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:08 AM
I bow to you, Limerick King!!!!! And Happy Father's Day to you Mr. Tim!!! (Love breasts!)
Babbit Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Just don't use the drano. Cute write. D
Ellison Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:06 AM
LOL Considered Draino but thought better of it just in time!!!
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Oh I reckon where it went. Right there n the end of your pen. Great write.
Ellison Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Yup... found it! LOL
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