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My Braino Has Withdrawn

There's only so much air, what happens when it's gone? Will we challenge our neighbours to a game of Mahjong? How about an arm wrestle Or a challenge skipping pebbles That's weird, methinks my braino has just withdrawn

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Date: 7/11/2016 5:06:00 PM
Great one Jack i had a break in the UK for 8 days and my muse is still on an extended holiday:-( hope you are well:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:56:00 PM
Never fear... Grandpa Troll is here... And without a doubt he's right... He says the air recycles at night.... Above and under the trees... In a glorious cascade of rainbow lights... So have you been outside to check it out? He calls it an effect of the Aurura Borealis. PS. I don't argue with Trolls... LOL
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:56:00 AM
Love your thoughts here, Jack. You always have something clever to say. It's funny what our brains can come up with. I love your weirdness! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/19/2016 6:09:00 AM
"I love your weirdness!"... you say the nicest things! LOL LOL LOL Love, Jack xxx
Date: 6/18/2016 7:38:00 PM
Some times our brains must rest...too often we put them to the test...smiles turn to frowns...must just shut them down...hey lookie there some breasts...Happy Father's Day Jackson
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/19/2016 6:08:00 AM
I bow to you, Limerick King!!!!! And Happy Father's Day to you Mr. Tim!!! (Love breasts!)
Date: 6/18/2016 12:21:00 PM
Just don't use the drano. Cute write. D
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/19/2016 6:06:00 AM
LOL Considered Draino but thought better of it just in time!!!
Date: 6/18/2016 9:04:00 AM
Oh I reckon where it went. Right there n the end of your pen. Great write.
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Date: 6/18/2016 9:55:00 AM
Yup... found it! LOL

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