Andrew Fairchild Poet Free verse

My Brain Hurts

KLOMM!!!

...Broken now.

I can change it!
That Daniel Amen
Says so...
I can change it!

...Plasticity!

OW!!!

(That's all I can take,
My Brain Hurts)


Date Written:  January 2, 2019
For:  Brainy Brevity Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Maureen McGreavy

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Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2019 at 7:34 PM Andrew, congratulations on this clever piece garnering second place! Wonderful! : ) Andrew Fairchild January 5, 2019 at 9:02 PM Praise God! I am so surprised!

Line Gauthier January 3, 2019 at 7:46 PM Congrats on your silver medal with this gem, Andrew. Andrew Fairchild January 3, 2019 at 8:53 PM Praise God! I am honored!

P.S. Awtry January 3, 2019 at 11:05 AM Congratulations, Andrew on your well deserved high honors in this contest!!! Andrew Fairchild January 3, 2019 at 7:03 PM Thank you so much! Praise God!

John Lawless January 3, 2019 at 10:19 AM Andrew, a mentor of mine once told me that "the only constant in life is change" Congrats on your placement in Mo's contest Andrew Fairchild January 3, 2019 at 7:03 PM Praise God! Thank you for your wise words! Truly, change is the only constant.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 3, 2019 at 9:08 AM I love this Andrew! Spoke such loud volumes to me it's like you were in my own head, Amen is amazing. (!!!) Congratulations on your silver finish in my contest, and a fave :) xomo! Andrew Fairchild January 3, 2019 at 7:02 PM Thank You So Much! Praise God! (My own dear wife had Bipolar, so I am a LITTLE familiar with what it's like when the brain won't do what we want it to!) I am honored that you liked it.