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My Boys

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My Boys

Two peas in a pod
Thats what they say you boys are
Acting as one and the same
Twin boys you were born
So much alike I can see
Both so naughty and so nice
Sedoka me any subject contest Sponsored by: Russell Sivey Written by: Carol Brown 02/25/2012 3rd Place winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/2/2012 9:01:00 PM
CAROL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/1/2012 2:37:00 PM
I know that I read this one and commented but I don't see it..Congrats on your winning work..I knew that it would win..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:20:00 AM
aww its a lovely poem :)
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Date: 3/1/2012 7:46:00 AM
Such endearing twins and this write on them!!! Loved it, so cute... Congrats Carol on your superb win in the sedoka contest. love, gautami
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:31:00 PM
Nice sedoka, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, KIm
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Date: 2/29/2012 11:17:00 AM
Congrats Carol on your win in the contest.
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:25:00 AM
Thank you to everyone and no I do not have twin boys. Thank you for my placement Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:22:00 AM
Carol, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest :) love Wilma
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:50:00 AM
Congratulations Carol on your well deserved win.Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:34:00 PM
endearing all the way, carol... you are on a roll.. my sweet congrats on your win!:) huggs!
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:19:00 PM
great win Carol ...twin boys ...double trouble nice:)
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Date: 2/28/2012 7:13:00 PM
congrats Carol on a dynamic win for this sweet write in Sedoka contest.. twin boys..how wonderful luv..
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Date: 2/28/2012 7:41:00 AM
You are in Children's heart. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:11:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Good luck with your Two peas in a pod for Russell's contest. Luv, Maureen
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Date: 2/27/2012 9:07:00 PM
This is sure cute, Carol. those two little boys, two peas in a pod!
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Date: 2/27/2012 8:04:00 PM
that little boy in the picture is as cute as he can be.
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:36:00 PM
wow so cool to have twins! Thanks so much for sharing! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/27/2012 2:41:00 PM
great Sedoka sweet Carol Brown, Russell should love it with neer, a frown....
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Date: 2/27/2012 2:07:00 PM
Best of luck in the contest Carol with this lovely Sedoka , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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Date: 2/27/2012 8:59:00 AM
This one made me smile Carol, the complexity of twin hood, love,viel
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Date: 2/27/2012 2:43:00 AM
I love this poem! Correct me if I am wrong, but is it similar to one you wrote a few months back? It may not be, but for some reason, it really sticks out! I did give it a 7 if that means anything! I hope so.
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:54:00 AM
This one is too cute Carol, all the best for Russell's contest.. Hope your weekend is a great one :) love Wilma
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:52:00 AM
heartwarming and full of natural charm, carol... your love for kids shine!.. winning huggs! :)
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:46:00 PM
Carol... good luck in the contest.... and by the way did you say truth...lol.. sending you soup mail...pd
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