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Two peas in a pod Thats what they say you boys are Acting as one and the same Twin boys you were born So much alike I can see Both so naughty and so nice Sedoka me any subject contest Sponsored by: Russell Sivey Written by: Carol Brown 02/25/2012 3rd Place winner

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:01:00 PM

CAROL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2012 2:37:00 PM

I know that I read this one and commented but I don't see it..Congrats on your winning work..I knew that it would win..Sara

Bethany Chipperfield

Date: 3/1/2012 11:20:00 AM

aww its a lovely poem :)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 3/1/2012 7:46:00 AM

Such endearing twins and this write on them!!! Loved it, so cute... Congrats Carol on your superb win in the sedoka contest. love, gautami

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/29/2012 9:27:00 PM

Congratulations!

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/29/2012 7:31:00 PM

Nice sedoka, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 2/29/2012 11:17:00 AM

Congrats Carol on your win in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/29/2012 7:25:00 AM

Thank you to everyone and no I do not have twin boys. Thank you for my placement Russell. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/29/2012 7:22:00 AM

Carol, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest :) love Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 2/29/2012 1:50:00 AM

Congratulations Carol on your well deserved win.Enjoyed.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2012 10:34:00 PM

endearing all the way, carol... you are on a roll.. my sweet congrats on your win!:) huggs!

Don Johnson

Date: 2/28/2012 9:19:00 PM

great win Carol ...twin boys ...double trouble nice:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2012 7:13:00 PM

congrats Carol on a dynamic win for this sweet write in Sedoka contest.. twin boys..how wonderful luv..

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/28/2012 7:41:00 AM

You are in Children's heart. Loved always, bl

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 2/28/2012 12:11:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Good luck with your Two peas in a pod for Russell's contest. Luv, Maureen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 9:07:00 PM

This is sure cute, Carol. those two little boys, two peas in a pod!

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/27/2012 8:04:00 PM

that little boy in the picture is as cute as he can be.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/27/2012 5:36:00 PM

wow so cool to have twins! Thanks so much for sharing! Congrad's Light & Love

Don Johnson

Date: 2/27/2012 2:41:00 PM

great Sedoka sweet Carol Brown, Russell should love it with neer, a frown....

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/27/2012 2:07:00 PM

Best of luck in the contest Carol with this lovely Sedoka , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 2/27/2012 2:43:00 AM

I love this poem! Correct me if I am wrong, but is it similar to one you wrote a few months back? It may not be, but for some reason, it really sticks out! I did give it a 7 if that means anything! I hope so.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/26/2012 11:54:00 AM

This one is too cute Carol, all the best for Russell's contest.. Hope your weekend is a great one :) love Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2012 9:52:00 AM

heartwarming and full of natural charm, carol... your love for kids shine!.. winning huggs! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2012 9:46:00 PM

Carol... good luck in the contest.... and by the way did you say truth...lol.. sending you soup mail...pd

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/25/2012 3:31:00 PM

Is this true? Do you have twin boys?