Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Sedoka

My Boys

Two peas in a pod
Thats what they say you boys are
Acting as one and the same
Twin boys you were born
So much alike I can see
Both so naughty and so nice

Sedoka me any subject contest
Sponsored by: Russell Sivey
Written by: Carol Brown
02/25/2012
3rd Place winner

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Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 9:01 PM CAROL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sara Kendrick March 1, 2012 at 2:37 PM I know that I read this one and commented but I don't see it..Congrats on your winning work..I knew that it would win..Sara

Bethany Chipperfield March 1, 2012 at 11:20 AM aww its a lovely poem :)

Gautami Phookan March 1, 2012 at 7:46 AM Such endearing twins and this write on them!!! Loved it, so cute... Congrats Carol on your superb win in the sedoka contest. love, gautami

Christopher Bunton February 29, 2012 at 9:27 PM Congratulations!

Kim Merryman February 29, 2012 at 7:31 PM Nice sedoka, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Jonas L. Rozario February 29, 2012 at 11:17 AM Congrats Carol on your win in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 29, 2012 at 7:25 AM Thank you to everyone and no I do not have twin boys. Thank you for my placement Russell. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels February 29, 2012 at 7:22 AM Carol, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest :) love Wilma

Kash Poet February 29, 2012 at 1:50 AM Congratulations Carol on your well deserved win.Enjoyed.

Nette Onclaud February 28, 2012 at 10:34 PM endearing all the way, carol... you are on a roll.. my sweet congrats on your win!:) huggs!

Don Johnson February 28, 2012 at 9:19 PM great win Carol ...twin boys ...double trouble nice:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2012 at 7:13 PM congrats Carol on a dynamic win for this sweet write in Sedoka contest.. twin boys..how wonderful luv..

Bl Devnath February 28, 2012 at 7:41 AM You are in Children's heart. Loved always, bl

Maureen Lefanue February 28, 2012 at 12:11 AM Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Good luck with your Two peas in a pod for Russell's contest. Luv, Maureen

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2012 at 9:07 PM This is sure cute, Carol. those two little boys, two peas in a pod!

Debbie Guzzi February 27, 2012 at 5:36 PM wow so cool to have twins! Thanks so much for sharing! Congrad's Light & Love

Don Johnson February 27, 2012 at 2:41 PM great Sedoka sweet Carol Brown, Russell should love it with neer, a frown....

Deck Fitzgerald February 27, 2012 at 2:07 PM Best of luck in the contest Carol with this lovely Sedoka , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx

Jslambert Mister Roboto February 27, 2012 at 2:43 AM I love this poem! Correct me if I am wrong, but is it similar to one you wrote a few months back? It may not be, but for some reason, it really sticks out! I did give it a 7 if that means anything! I hope so.

Wilma Neels February 26, 2012 at 11:54 AM This one is too cute Carol, all the best for Russell's contest.. Hope your weekend is a great one :) love Wilma

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2012 at 9:52 AM heartwarming and full of natural charm, carol... your love for kids shine!.. winning huggs! :)

Poet Destroyer A February 25, 2012 at 9:46 PM Carol... good luck in the contest.... and by the way did you say truth...lol.. sending you soup mail...pd

Black Eyed Susan February 25, 2012 at 3:31 PM Is this true? Do you have twin boys?

Jack Horne February 25, 2012 at 11:42 AM Love this sweet piece, Carol. Thanks for all your kind words : )

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