My Boy / Bridgeport Ct 1981

The images plucked from a full soft drive like over blown berries
threatening to fall……blasted to the humus. Swing chains creak.
The high-backed, heart carved, chalk white, front porch swing sways;
to the kicking of your feet. Beside me, you sit in spankin’ new school clothes singing.

Together wrapped like pretzel dough, we warble, annoying the sparrows.
The bumble bee yellow and black stripped school bus is late.
The dreamy cottage bungalows’ screen porch perches like a tree house ledge
over the four story drop off. Hundred year old sentinel pines tower still above us, 
limbs house hug. The occasional cone drop ricochets down the trunk 
to a soft needle landing, and a bouncing roll before falling off the retaining wall

We own the world. King and Queen of the Mountain are we. I sing “Ducky Duddle” to you. 
You laugh. All the joy in the world in such a small sound. Oh, how I loved to make you happy.
Two short years before, even your name was new to you..my boy, Jamie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 12:02 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian
Anish Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 4:01 PM
Sweet poetry. Reminds me of Ray Bradbury's "Dandelion Wine" which evokes a country childhood. Yours Matthew Anish
Strand Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Beautifully penned Debbie.Especially like openng phrase.Thank you for your comments on my blog today rgds Brian
Austin Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Of all the things Jamie, as an adult, will remember, your description will be his image. He'll remember that moment of love, even if subconsciously. Great write. Love, daver
Crisci Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 6:02 PM
Hi, Deborah! I love the images captured in your lovely poem...the joyful memory of your son Jamie...the endless love of a mother for her son. The imagery and feeling are very powerful and touching. I wish continued success with your writing. Warm Regards and may God bless you and your loved ones. Smiles from Andrew.
Richards Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 2:25 PM
The tender touch of the love for this child, this memory....with a portrait of a porch swing, a simple moment in time that takes me to my own cherished moments. Beautifully written, Deborah!
Mcmullin Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 2:11 PM
What an artist you are, painting memories of your world, on a canvas, for all the world to contemplate; well done, poetess! poet butterfly
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May 3, 2009 at 1:38 PM
This is a very touching and loving tribute to your son. They do grow up too fast. You imagery is magnificent. I can smell the sceted pines as they stand guarding. I enjoyed this. Keep writing. Love , Dane
Winter Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:56 AM
What a precious memory, captured in unique, outstanding poetry. I picture you clearly, and so feel the love. Slowly trying to come back here Debbie, sorry for what I've missed. Hugs, shar xoxo
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