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My Boy

I came alive the moment I met you I don't know how I breathed before You made my life complete dear And I'll break when you walk out the door. My boy. You are special beyond comprehension So perfect you can't understand I'll be eternally grateful knowing You were mine and you held my hand My boy. I would die for you dear in a heartbeat You give more than you can ever know Such a beautiful soul, my heart swells with pride, As I stand back and I watch how you grow. My boy. Tired my dear, I have watched you sleep I have cried as I stroked your face I'll blink and I will be without you Not here in my happiest place. My boy. Live life and love and be happy Safe in the comfort and joy Of knowing I will always be waiting For you my dear, my dear boy. My boy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/17/2016 11:06:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Hayley.
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on this win! This really touched my heart... expression of love so wonderfully expressed. A 7
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this romantic piece Haley!
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:11:00 PM
Hi Hayley, Congrats on your placement in Skat's contest. A wonderful poem....Vlad.
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:24:00 AM
Hayley, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:44:00 AM
Hayley, thank you for the support. :) SK
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:07:00 PM
Hayley, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2015 2:58:00 PM
Hayley, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**
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Date: 2/22/2015 8:20:00 AM
This poem appealed to me for the emotions portrayed in those lines. And it is beautifully composed too... Congratulations and thank you Hayley for gracing my contest!!!
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Hayley Garland
Date: 3/5/2015 3:30:00 AM
wow, thank you very much! x
Date: 2/20/2015 10:14:00 PM
Hayley, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/19/2015 3:07:00 PM
A beautiful tribute I really enjoyed your poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:58:00 AM
Hello Hayley, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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