My Boy

My Boy 
His heart is breaking its tearing me apart, 
His suffered in silence kept things close to his heart, 
He feels no one wants him although he try's hard, 
To be a good man but still a child at heart, 
The world on his shoulders burdens to hard, 
Emotions are damaged your insides are scared, 
It doesn't matter what he try's to do, 
It turns out rung and distorts his view, 
He can't see forward only into the past, 
Left in misery bottom of the class, 
Withdrawn and upset he's part of the past, 
He has a heart of gold that's been shattered like glass, 
This girl has destroyed him this year and last, 
How long can my sons bad luck last , 
This is to you son to wish you the best. 
To say i will always be here in your unhappiness, 
You will turn the corner you will see, 
You've escaped the shackles and now your free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/5/2010 6:04:00 PM
Touchin poem. God Bless you and your son. Vince
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:43:00 AM
very nice poem for your son,great writing,lovely words,a lucky son,your poems remind me of me and my poetry,keep the words flowing,and a warm welcome to poetrysoup,ken
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:13:00 AM
You have a talent for expression. Very warm sentiments. Your love for him radiates in this poem. Nice write. David
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