Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

My Bonny Lass

She wore a tartan bonnet
 
upon her flame red locks,

Around her waist she wore a kilt

For her no fancy frocks.

She puts fire in my veins,

I love her so, I do.

Oh my bonny, bonny lass

My heart I give to you.

I'll love you forever,
 
Aye, my lass I will

And should I live a thousand years,

I shall love you still.

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Janis Medders Tobechi December 12, 2016 at 4:57 PM I would agree with Kim, it has an old fashion air to it. Congratulations. Gary Smith December 12, 2016 at 5:07 PM Thank you Janis :)

Kim Rodrigues December 10, 2016 at 9:36 AM An old-fashioned poem! So lovely, Gary! Gary Smith December 10, 2016 at 9:36 AM Thank you Kim :)

Akkina Downing December 9, 2016 at 4:26 PM Just perfect! Sweet to the soul :) Gary Smith December 9, 2016 at 5:23 PM Thank you Akkina :)

Chris Green December 9, 2016 at 8:48 AM Beautiful Gary, the flame of eternal love, when one sparks that in your heart, it creates a warming wonderful glow. Aye, this were lovely. Gary Smith December 9, 2016 at 9:26 AM Thank you Chris :)